The factory has a barbed wire fence around it to keep people out. Carrie says she’s heard there is a hole in the fence and plans to ignore the warnings to keep out. Vanessa doesn’t want to go past the fence or break into the building because they could get in trouble.
When Carrie sees someone she thinks is security, they freak out, hide behind a bush and then run away. When they come back, they see a black sheet on the ground near the fence and freak out. A real estate agent walks up and says they should leave because it’s dangerous. They take an attitude with him and after he leaves, they freak out.
A large amount of time is spent talking about how creepy real estate agent Kyle was. But the problem is he wasn’t creepy at all. He calmly told them to leave and they copped an attitude and told him they knew something was going on and they were going to figure out what it was. They are obsessed with Kyle.
Their frontal lobes don’t seem to be functioning since they can’t do basic reasoning or understand the simplest things. Security guard at an abandoned building? There’s no reason to have them. Real estate agent tells you an abandoned building is dangerous? That’s suspicious because he didn’t tell you why it was dangerous. Agent asks them to leave private property? He must be hiding something. Black sheet on the ground? Nothing like that has ever been seen before.
Even after they get past the fence, they’re still idiots. As they walk along the length of the building, they see someone far behind coming towards them. They run, turn the corner of the building and duck down. Vanessa says they should hide, but Carrie has no sense of self preservation and stays right around the corner. If someone is walking towards them, he’s going to have to stop quick once he tries to round the corner.
In their minds, everything points to something weird going on being hidden from them. Carrie wants to film her documentary and tell the world what it is - even though Carrie can’t even comprehend simple things and has never made a documentary. Holy crap, Carrie is useless.
The dialogue is ridiculously repetitive. Don’t do a drinking game or you’ll die of alcohol poisoning. They repeat the word creepy so many times that after 35 minutes, I started counting the number of times they said it. The movie is 72 minute long and in the last 37 minutes they said the word creepy 32 times. .
Most of the last half of the movie is clips from the movie. To what end? We’ve already seen the footage and it adds nothing new. It seems to solely be due to padding out a short film to the length of a movie. Some of the footage is seen more than two times. Also none of it is that complex or deep enough to need to be seen again.
If you’re hoping for paranormal events, it’s almost non-existent. There are two short scenes towards the end of the movie. Other than that, it’s just two teenage girls talking about how everything is creepy and being flummoxed by simple concepts. The scenes of them obsessing about why Kyle would tell them it’s dangerous but not explain what is dangerous is brain numbing. If someone told them molten lead was dangerous, would they think it was suspicious because they weren’t told why it was dangerous?
Some of the footage looked like it was shot through a screen door. Also since they were shooting outside in the wind, there are scenes where the dialogue is unintelligible and all you can hear is the wind.
Ridiculous dialogue
Why would an abandoned factory have a security guard though? It makes no sense.
Carrie: We just walked across something really creepy. This is like, I don’t know, a black sheet or something? Where…
Vanessa: I’ve never seen anything like that.
Carrie: … did this come from? It’s really creepy. I don’t know why it’s laying here. What’s it doing.
There’s this creepy black sheet. So…what’s that all about.
Kyle: You guys need to get your stuff and head on out of here.
Carrie: There was definitely something here. Something creepy is going on [scoff] and I’m going to get to the bottom of it.
Why don’t you see it from my perspective. That guy is creepy. He wants us to leave suddenly. He’s like, it’s dangerous in there. Like, what does that even mean? What’s so dangerous inside?
There’s something really weird about a him and that fact he’s saying it’s dangerous, but wouldn't say why? Like why would you even say that if you’re not going to explain yourself.
The way he was saying it’s so dangerous and not explaining why? It was so creepy.
There’s definitely more that’s going on. I don’t think it’s paranormal. it’s something creepy on another scale is happening and it has to do with that guy
We have to do our duty to film something.
How did I hear something and then all of the sudden the sheet appeared out of nowhere.
Vanessa: Are you serious? I never agreed to do that. We’re not breaking the law for a paranormal investigation.
Carrie: On my god, calm down. How are we even going to get in trouble?
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| Our two intrepid investigators |
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| The creepy black sheet. Oooo isn’t it scary kids? |
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| Lots of shots like this |
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| Waiting around the corner to see if someone is following them |
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| it looks like it was shot through a screen door |
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